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StephyBob07
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-04-25 10:26 PM


Have i really lived?
I feel as if I'm bound to this darkness forever.
The monsters have called me to their closet,
only for me to never escape.
These clawing hands aim at my soul
but i won't let them succeed.
It's as though I see the face of evil
in an evanescent glow.
What am i searching for?
I wish to wake,
just as i see a ring of light,
dazzling the darkness of my crying heart.
In that endless light I will find my salvation.
For I will live.

"...and poets are born knowing the language of angels." -Madeline L'Engle

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Musicmaker1969
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1 posted 2003-04-25 11:05 PM


Beautiful poem - vivid pictures.  Good job.

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Liegh Welna
(formerly Sheri Liegh Adams)
sheriliegh@reddens.ca

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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2 posted 2003-04-26 02:30 AM


Well, I think you have really lived!  Wow!
-Kahlil

Lost_Soul
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since 2003-04-17
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3 posted 2003-04-27 05:06 PM


beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
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