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MellonCollie
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since 2003-04-11
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0 posted 2003-04-24 07:21 AM


hate you for your happiness
hate you for beeing fake
hate you for what you represent
     your everything that i don't want to be

hate you for living one big lie
hate you for not telling the truth
hate you for your political correctness
     your everything that i don't want to be

hate you for your selfishness
hate you for your friends
hate you for your happy live
     your everything that i can never be

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

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Georgia
1 posted 2003-04-24 11:25 AM


someone didn't wake up on the right side of the bed
qtpieelmo
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2 posted 2003-04-26 09:55 PM


Hmmm, now how did this one slip past me? lol--Another great expression of yourself, I've felt much of this same hate before!! Great work!!


ELMO

P.S. I think you meant "happy life" though instead of "happy live", & beeing is spelt being. I'm not being critical, I'm just trying to help you out

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (04-26-2003 09:56 PM).]

Jager
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Event Horizon
3 posted 2003-04-27 10:44 PM


I feel your anger man.
MellonCollie
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4 posted 2003-04-28 07:14 AM


Thanx you all three...

and Elmo, thanx for showin' me my mistakes need to contact a moderator to delete the mistakes  

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
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5 posted 2003-04-28 08:32 PM


hate you for your happy live? otherwise, very good

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
6 posted 2003-04-29 04:03 PM


Just go to edit MellonCollie & you can fix it yourself!!


ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

MellonCollie
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7 posted 2003-04-29 05:09 PM


tornskirt: i wanted to express that some people have a happy live, but I don't...

Elmo: Can' edit it anymore...it says:
Sorry, but editing is only allowed for 24 hours after the original posting. Please contact a Moderator for help.

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

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