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Exodus
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since 2003-04-14
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Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

0 posted 2003-04-23 11:32 AM


And I have been changed by this night's rain... grown so estranged
I drag weary down the haunted sands of time; for this is my life's end
When the synchronistic cliches seem too surreal to see clearly
I have tried christianity, bhuddism, even Islam...
But when finding all my necromantic sacrifices -- their blood has been diluted
Such milky veins wash, a rushing run -- i cry as they seep insanely draining throughout my mind.

Riverrapids of bright bluewhite in my pitchblack thoughts flood my brain; the ink of my thoughts
Yet even this chaotic delirium which I live seems somewhat estranged
Yes... I seek a heart's blood -- with a desire pure and undeluded
Into which I will etch my legacy, with the scalpel I hold...
And slice open this crimson muscle; perform this task of damned fate

Now I have seen armageddons rage ablaze, which are grill-barbecues with
Black iron ash alters of carcoal briquette gods burning in summer-lawn-chairs... apocalypse
Mesquite smoke entrails -- drip and sizzle -- (And what a tasty treat it shall be!)
Surburban saturdays fresh-mowed dwellings stare deranged
From the glow of television labotomies -- a darkness -- tinpan-brainfried idiots
Skip a jumpdance slaghterhouse shuffle, in ever-deepening credit-line masses; trapped in doom.

Under confusion's weight, I wander and wander as a drunken court jester...
I wonder at wonders in the still crimson stagnate pools of glow and THIS! ...ridiculous!
With this god's blind eye I wander astray on a path of anarchy.
I live to have read the pages -- and scribed a thousand and one more -- of my morbid brain,
And to remember each; for one reason, for all time; and it's deranged.
Always weeping, always weeping, I hold my own heart... with distrust in my body.

Good lord... open guts spill forth before me, and in each sickly wet fold I read; death.
After which pours forth the milksblood of Christ... with a bitter loving smile.
I try and shake this shadow you fear, ... Why am I so deranged?
And one more modern miracle each day becomes useless
But I'm not surprised, nor do i grow weary of every evening's apocalypse
I feel the groove of each judgement day in this new heart

So I walk on this life, like the spine of a fine occult tome
Reflecting my past judgement, and past conciousness
Inscribe these secret words I took, and title my satanic book 'Apocalypse'
Yet dreaming still of a hope...
Smile.



Through the minds of many, and the souls of few... arises the entity of Exodus. Arrows of fire, swords of ice... the necromantic power of he shall des

© Copyright 2003 Jeremy Skibicki - All Rights Reserved
iMMuNe
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1 posted 2003-04-23 11:49 AM


Welp, I.....I honostly don't know what to say.

Its kinda like "Greatness without structure"

I liked it..but I dont know how to describe it.

Oh..and welcome !

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-04-28 01:43 PM


I like the piece but it needs a tad restructuring to make it flow abit better. Overall good piece
qtpieelmo
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3 posted 2003-04-28 03:33 PM


Great Job!!


ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

Jager
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since 2003-04-27
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Event Horizon
4 posted 2003-04-28 06:11 PM


I'm lost for words.
tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 87

5 posted 2003-04-28 08:28 PM


amazing

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

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