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iMMuNe
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0 posted 2003-04-23 09:11 AM


Go to sleep,
Lay down in your bed,
The night grows cold,
WISHING - you was dead.

Dream of fantasies,
Dream of things,
Dream of the bloodshed,
Dream of the pain you've given me.

Whatever you want it to be,
Its your last,
Make it good,
The demon will contrast,

What you have left,
The blade to your neck,
And all the pain all the anger,
You refused to regret.

Go to sleep,
Dream of the pain you've given me,
The last thing you'll ever think of,
Is the one you took away from me.

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-04-24 11:22 AM


alot of pain in this one
iMMuNe
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2 posted 2003-04-24 11:47 AM


Thanks, and your right. This one deals with alot of anger, like most of my writings. I haven't been "writing able" in the past days, and you could probably tell..
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3 posted 2003-04-28 12:37 PM


Welcome to the dark side. Ha, Ha. Great write. This truly belongs in the Dark Poetry.
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