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IcyFlamez89
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0 posted 2003-04-22 02:17 AM


MoonGoddess<br><a href=

Forever cold is your steely gaze.
Icy is the heart you have.
One so devoid of any feeling,
I wonder if you ever dream.

Goddess of the Night engulf me,
Make me as hard and dark as you.
Angel of the Lamentable,
Turn me blind and blue...

[This message has been edited by IcyFlamez89 (04-22-2003 02:22 AM).]

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MellonCollie
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1 posted 2003-04-22 01:21 PM


love the pic and the poem (manga rules)

Make me as hard and dark as you.
Angel of the Lamentable,
Turn me blind and blue...

i simply love it

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

IcyFlamez89
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2 posted 2003-04-22 02:51 PM


Thanx. I love anime/manga too.
MellonCollie
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3 posted 2003-04-22 03:32 PM


what can i say...another thing we have in common

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
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4 posted 2003-04-24 08:36 AM


great

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

JP
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5 posted 2003-04-24 11:14 AM


Nicely done.  Short and leaves me wanting alot more...

Dang, now I have to go searching for some ice...

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

IcyFlamez89
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6 posted 2003-04-26 03:45 PM


Ya i noe....it wuz stupid, but i only put an exerpt ob da whole poem. I didn't like the other parts so i just put these two stanzas. I might post da whole poems if u really crave it, lol
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