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Dark Poetry #3

in between the walls

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

0 posted 2003-04-19 08:50 PM

someplace between
living and dying
somewhere between
surival and giving up
somewhere between
real and fake
somewhere between
my heart and yours
life is being lived
in between these walls

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

1 posted 2003-04-20 03:33 PM

you explain exactly how it is and i applaud you for that. great, true poem, i can tell this came from the heart.

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

2 posted 2003-04-20 06:52 PM

hey, thanks!

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2003-04-20 10:18 PM

Short & to the point!! I love it!!

ELMO

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

4 posted 2003-04-21 08:24 AM

i guess were all imprisoned betwen these walls...nice poem by the way

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

5 posted 2003-04-21 12:59 PM

Here Here!! Encore! Loved it so much

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-04-22 05:42 PM

torn:

you are one amazing writer - everything
I read of yours touches me deeply
as I can relate - once was there . . .
or am now

Keep writing - please
xxoo

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