something short i wrote in class

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Dark Poetry #3

something short i wrote in class

kinson
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since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2003-04-17 10:38 PM

how many times must i visit this place
this house full of windows
with pulled down shades
and i just came down cause im feeling so alone
but it seems no ones home
could i borrow a little time
i puromise il give you a little of mine
but it seems im not going anywhere tonight
cause your no where in sight

its getting close
to twilight now
the sky is turning blue
and nothings ever seemed so replulsive
the sky, your house or you

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

1 posted 2003-04-17 10:43 PM

I really liked the way you expressed yourself, you have a few spelling/grammer errors but hey..dont we all, haha, keep up the good work!

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

2 posted 2003-04-18 04:51 AM

i really like the sadness in this poem

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

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