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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-17 08:59 PM


Waiting for the pain to subside
like the tides in the full moon, they will only rise
I know what I want,But I will never see the light of day
everyday I pray for the pain to go away
the days go on and I except defeat
sadness seems inevitable,on my knees I beg and plead
what's the world coming to? destroying someone like me
but the rest of the world doesn't care if I can't breathe


© Copyright 2003 Talia - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-04-17 09:16 PM


Self-rescue is the hardest thing...it's not what we want...
MellonCollie
Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
2 posted 2003-04-18 04:43 AM


Wow this is very sad, and very touching...enjoyed every single word, wish it was longer

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

Black Swan
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon
3 posted 2003-04-18 04:57 AM


thank you guys for reading! ~ Talia
silvergriffinfire
Junior Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 21
middle of nowhere
4 posted 2003-04-18 09:39 PM


In spite of the sadness, I want more. Great.

Descendus Averno Facillis Est

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-04-19 07:04 AM


Talia - an awful feeling - yes - I know it well but it can be overcome
This IS amazing!
xxoo

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