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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2003-04-17 09:43 AM


WHEN PUSH TURNS TO SHOVE

When push turns to shove,
it really does hurt.
He pushed me to succeed,
then he shoved me away.
He pushed me to feel,
now he's shoved his feelings aside.
When push turns to shove,
it's more like a stab.
Taking away,
everything we once had.
When push turns to shove,
can't take this abuse.
A push is quite gentle, caring, loving.
A shove cuts like a knife,
you never saw coming.
When push turns to shove,
it's just not the same.
When push turns to shove,
I take the blame!


ELMO

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MellonCollie
Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
1 posted 2003-04-17 10:46 AM


Horray, another on of your strong, dark poems.
I especially enjoyed the line:
He pushed me to feel,
now he's shoved his feelings aside

In some way it evoked some long lost feelings in me
Go on, gimme some more of'em

P.S. Why didn't you answer my mail??


how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

[This message has been edited by MellonCollie (04-17-2003 10:56 AM).]

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2003-04-17 01:04 PM


Awe, Thanx MellonCollie!! People like you are why I keep comin back!!


ELMO

P.S. Mail? I didn't get any mail from u? Maybe I missed it & deleted it by accident? Sowwie

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (04-17-2003 01:10 PM).]

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