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MellonCollie
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since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

0 posted 2003-04-14 07:20 PM

Wish I could

wish i could cry
wish i would die
but i don't know why
i just can't

feel sorry for myself
i’m stuck in my shell
fells like
as I’d be burning in hell

want to feel my pain
want to feel my loss
nailed to my personal cross
But still I don't feel

wish I could cry
want to feel my tears
want to face my fears

but I can’t

[This message has been edited by MellonCollie (04-14-2003 07:21 PM).]

IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

1 posted 2003-04-14 08:36 PM

You're a lot like me in so many ways, it's scary. I wish for the saym things myself many times. Loved the emotions that you've evoked.

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

2 posted 2003-04-15 04:41 AM

Thanx IcyFlamez89...it's always good to find a brother in pain

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-04-15 06:37 PM

sad but nicely done!

Jessica

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since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

4 posted 2003-04-16 08:25 PM

I've felt this exact way for so long until I for a min. I thought I had writen this myself. Wonderful work here and I hope you learn or already know how to release these thoughts onto paper and paper only. I figured that out when it was almost too late for me. I appreciate your soul-bearing and I look forward to seeing more. Thank You.
~Jessa

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY