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qtpieelmo
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0 posted 2003-04-13 02:48 PM


LOVE IS BLIND!!

I know what that means now!
Love blinds you.
Blinds you from deceipt,
betrayal
Blinds you from the truth,
from the evil one can possess.
Blinds you from seeing.
Making you think they care,
are doing the best for you,
when really it's quite the opposite.
Love lies within your family,
your true friends.
The people who've been,
by your side all along.
They are the ones,
who can point you to the truth,
open your eyes,
when you're all wrapped up,
in the "love" you thought you shared,
with a stranger.
Love is a BLINDfold!!

~Love Sux~
(sucks you in)


ELMO

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (04-13-2003 02:50 PM).]

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Kahlil
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1 posted 2003-04-13 03:10 PM


Unfortunately, we don't usually listen to the family and friends who really love us "when you're all wrapped up,in the "love" you thought you shared with a stranger".  But you have learned and you may recognize the signs next time.
Love IS a BLINDfold, then!!  I love that play on words.

MellonCollie
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2 posted 2003-04-13 04:04 PM


Horray...another one of your great poems...it remined me of that U2-song love is blindness...i'm a real sucker for your poems  

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

[This message has been edited by MellonCollie (04-13-2003 04:05 PM).]

qtpieelmo
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3 posted 2003-04-13 05:30 PM


Thanx for the sweet replies!! Yeah I didn't want to hear it from every1 else who saw it comin way b4 I did, next time maybe I'll be more open to listening tho--lol--And thank you Melloncollie, it's always nice to hear from you!! I'll have to look up that song, never heard it b4!!


ELMO

MellonCollie
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4 posted 2003-04-13 05:43 PM


what??? u never heard of U2's love is blindness it's such a great love song...u need to listen to it sometime

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

qtpieelmo
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5 posted 2003-04-13 08:39 PM


Yes I will
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6 posted 2003-04-16 03:11 PM


brilliantly done!
qtpieelmo
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7 posted 2003-04-16 11:21 PM


Awe--thanx Brad, that means a lot to me!!


ELMO

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