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Barbara Trautman
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0 posted 2003-04-12 11:15 PM


READING THE NEWS

Newspapers come at dawn
When the sky is partly cloudy
The air smelling clean and sweet
Flowers blooming, lawns green.

The morning air was soft and sweet
I opened the paper and looked again
My eyes fell on the front page
Where pictures tore at my heart.

A young man’s face leapt out at me
Contorted, angry, fearful
No more than twenty, maybe less
Gesturing wildly, mouth open, eyes squinched.

I stared at him though he couldn’t see me
The tension in his stance frightening
His eyes frightened, too
Someone’s son, someone’s lover.

Across from him squats another boy
Mouth open, hand frozen in mid-air
Burdened with packs, guns and a war
A war he didn’t start but now must fight.

The bridge they stand on in shambles
The country they fight, foreign soil
Fear fills their air, smoke in their eyes
One soldier lies where he fell, now dead.

Another section, “The Nation at War”
Another picture, several young Americans
Play-acting Sadam in his palace, sitting in his chair
Their faces look guilty, as though caught at play.

Rubble surrounds them of elegance once fine
The boys are alive and talking their leisure
One moment of play at a time
Guns once a plaything, now a reality.

On the next page, another picture
Of father and his son, reunited
Separated for many years
By wars neither ever wanted.

Someday, soon, we all hope
Some of these young men will return
Back to their wives, girlfriends and jobs
Leaving armored suits, chemical warfare and guns behind.

Who will they be when they hug their mothers close
Will they be the young men who went to war
War makes the adrenalin flow
Boys become men.

They will have looked the enemy in the eye
They will have killed and maimed
They will have become accustomed
To living lives on the edge of death.

On one page are women and children
Waving and smiling, apparently gleeful
But on the next page are more young soldiers
Crouching in a fog of smoke, guns drawn.

Some will go home to the arms of family
Many will make the trip in body bags
Their eyes will be closed to our green lawns
To our soft spring air, never to enjoy again.

Who started this war?  Did they ask permission?
Did the young men say they wanted to fight a war
A war so far from here, they didn’t know where
Did their parents say they wanted this to happen?

The anguish, the pain, fear, hurt
Statues being toppled by jubilant crowds
Buildings looted by laughing people
Soldiers kneeling, eyes watchful, guns drawn.

Civilians not declaring their intent
Soldiers fire, fearing for their safety
Medics tenderly, lovingly care for an injured child
Bravery, blood, kisses and more kisses.

This war so terrible, so awful
We, the invaders, they, the hometown people
We don’t hate them, but they hate us
When shooting stops, what then?

The young men, no longer boys
Innocence blunted by blood
Girls left behind remain the same
The soldiers are products of war.



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1 posted 2003-04-12 11:42 PM


A very well written poem.  It's like some of mine - long but needed to make the point.  Very well written.

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Welna
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