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MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

0 posted 2003-04-11 06:36 PM

alone

i hanker for your love
yearn for your touch
but i know
i hurt you so much

i didn't even break your heart
i tore it apart
my heart was cold
as cold as me
now it bleeds
bleeds for thee

loathe myself for leaving you
know you hate me too
and in some sad way
i'm glad you do

[This message has been edited by MellonCollie (04-13-2003 10:10 AM).]

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

1 posted 2003-04-11 07:53 PM

Awe, this is so sad-i love it--i like how it flows so smoothly!!

You have a great heart!! Someday you'll find out whose hands it really belongs in!! Hope to see more poems from u very soon!!

ELMO

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

2 posted 2003-04-12 01:42 AM

thanx ELMO...i'm really glad someone likes my words

Lost_Soul
Junior Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 37
California, United States

3 posted 2003-05-10 12:06 PM

This is good. I liked it a lot.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-05-10 01:03 AM

This is really good....
I may have welcomed you before but, if I didn't.....
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!
I think I know this feeling. It comes with hurting the feelings badly of someone you really love.
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

wings of the moon
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 323
Pink bubblegum land

5 posted 2003-05-10 06:09 AM

awww...
a very emotional and powerful write...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-05-10 06:56 PM

Simon:

raw bleed
I know this one well
Welcome to PIP!
nice entrance
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (05-10-2003 06:57 PM).]

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

7 posted 2003-05-10 07:01 PM

thanx, thanx for reading my poem

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

[This message has been edited by MellonCollie (05-11-2003 06:07 PM).]

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