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Jessica
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0 posted 2003-04-03 07:41 PM


Put on a smile,
Let's get the show on the road.
It's worth all the while,
Even with the heavy load.

The glistening bright eyes,
Confuses the observers.
No way you could see the lies,
No way you could see he hurt her.

Nothing but an emotion,
It can't drag you down,
Just simply mental commotion,
So cover the pain and flip the frown.

She's beautiful and smart,
She's constructed of steel.
She'll never experience a broken heart,
All she knows to do is heal.

You have to play the game,
And let nothing in.
Not possible to portray shame.
She can only win.

[This message has been edited by Jessica (04-03-2003 07:43 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-05 05:14 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Sadly, those who keep the pain concealed forever will begin to fall apart, if the pain can be opened up somehow one will always be victorious! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jessica, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Kellie_Cantrell
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2 posted 2003-04-05 05:37 PM


Very good poem, I felt as if it were directed right at me... I am going to print this and put it in my binder so that I can read it every day and remind myself how special I really am and that I need not hide how I feel!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

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3 posted 2003-04-05 06:47 PM


Nicely written piece  Jessica ~ Bonnie

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Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-04-07 12:23 PM


Heartfelt!
carol
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5 posted 2003-04-12 03:30 PM


so sad but good write

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Jessica
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6 posted 2003-04-14 08:01 PM


Thank you for all of your replies.  I know I haven't been here in a while but your opinions still mean a lot to me. *hugs* Thanks again

                  ~Jessa

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