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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
This isn't particularly one of my favorites but I just thought i'd share it cause I like how I worded a couple of verses... Dead You're dead to me You don't exist in my life I've cast a shadow over you Now you're gone Gone forever banished out of my head that you left destructed beyond recignition My emotions run freely now I can spill what I've kept for so long because you're dead to me I write one last poem for you before you compleatly disappear rip out my heart and leave it on the floor for now you're dead to me and I won't visit your grave until you fix what you broke Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sad to say, but most times the broken never gets fixed... *s M |
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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
and that's why I write my dark poetry. =] I learn to live with my pain. Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me... |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea--Poetry is therapy to me--I write best when I'm not happy, thoughts come more freely & it helps with the pain!! It always gets better, some1 new will come along & you'll forget everything that came before!! I loved this piece!!!   ELMO |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminded me of something my ex wife said to me as she was divorcing me..."James, you're dead to me. You no longer exist." James |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
it's a real sad poem, and I really enjoyed it...I think it's great that you share your hate with others...helps you gettin' over it, I guess how will i laugh tomorrow |
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