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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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The sun has disappeared love, like the day, faded went over the horizon and I doubt shall ever return. The darkness now covers all. Earth is in the deep of shadow, the moon plays, stars dance. Yet without love, a wallflower, I care not for the beauty of night shaded sky. The stars, in step, to this I'm blind. Love, like the day, faded went over the horizon, and I know shall never return. A dance upon dark curtain, I'm certain, will not refresh a rose in death. WhiteRose |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
its all you rose.  -majnu |
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somethinginyoursocks Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 28IN, the U.S. of A. |
Yes! Ah...just as in Sparknotes, your intelligence shines here in your poetry! I'm glad to actually read some of your work. You've got a good use of words (keeping it simple and using 'less is more') and the imagery and similes are stupendous! This will be a favorite of mine for a long time! -I don't need a signature- |
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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
It was a beautiful poem, I like your writing style. Keep it up! You go girl! |
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