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Dark Poetry #3

Evil Me

singular_one
Junior Member

since 2003-03-05

Posts 14

0 posted 2003-03-25 06:36 AM

EVIL ME

A girl with a young, nice and tight body
She's in love with everybody
But whenever I’m getting in her way
She politely asks me to go away

I just can't see how are those things related
Why I'm always the one being hated
Does the fact I prefer darkness rather than light
Makes my mind act like a dynamite

pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

1 posted 2003-03-25 01:13 PM

Take it from me, she's probably hurting as much as you are. Thank you for this heartwrenching, beautiful poem. *applause*

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

SilentFreija
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 37

2 posted 2003-03-30 05:24 PM

my mind perfers dark over light too. =] Great job! loved it!

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

3 posted 2003-03-31 01:08 AM

And I prefer balance, nice write and welcome to the forums.
Jason

Krystopher Morris
Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry

4 posted 2003-04-03 02:57 PM

Don't Worry about prefering dark...sometimes we all do

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

5 posted 2003-04-12 01:55 PM

There is beauty in darkness...

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

6 posted 2003-04-12 01:57 PM

Great poem...want to join me in the shadows?

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