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Finally_When
Junior Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 13
Land Of Misfits...

0 posted 2003-03-21 02:38 PM



If there was no more love,
than the heart would subside
through the depths of impurity.

No longer is time precious,
lonely friends, families take it away
as if it were thiers' to own.

Gradually no heart bleeds
being shreaded in a blender,
thoughts of memories seep inside the mind.

Blast apart my soul,
no longer do I need
what cant be given.

Begging and pleading
the completeness once felt
has washed away, landing swiftly
on a filled beach.
Barren and alone there is no protector,
no place to hide,
yet there is every given reason
to want to die.


Simply When..

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Starsfalling
Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows
1 posted 2003-03-21 02:44 PM


wow... im really impressed, blown outa the water is more like it
i only wonder what meaning it has to u
-lance

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