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Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

0 posted 2003-03-16 12:40 PM

You said you were my friend, you did,
but then you said it all must end,
why do you call yourself a friend? Friends stick together to the end. They stick it out through thick and thin, they grit their teeth and jut their chin. They dont give up and turn their back,
you traitorous worthless no good hack, just because your brand new "friend" doesnt like the way i am.
Is there something wrong with me? We had so much, at least we used to, then you abused me, so now i abuse you, i dont ever want to see you again, friends are forever but not this time, goodbye now, slime.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2003-03-16 05:08 AM

I would say you can kiss that friendship goodbye for sure. Well rhymed again, enjoyed.

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-03-20 07:40 AM

You rhyme quite well....the hurt and anger are coming through here!!!! Very sad!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Rapscallion
New Member

since 2003-03-24

Posts 7

3 posted 2003-03-24 07:23 PM

At last, a poet who is not afraid to rhyme. Reading your work was a pleasure. Not that I enjoy reading about the pain of others! Well, maybe, if it’s someone who I really don’t like. I don’t know you so it’s a safe bet I enjoyed reading your poem for its own sake.

[This message has been edited by Rapscallion (03-24-2003 07:24 PM).]

pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

4 posted 2003-03-25 12:53 PM

good good good. Nice use of rhyming and excellent words that really captured feeling. *applause*

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

5 posted 2003-04-05 09:23 AM

I have totally been thru this and know exactly what its like, and I did the same thing you did, and God sent me an angel (my new best friend) and she is absolutely the best thing that has EVER happened to me. She is what I call my hero, You will find someone (even thought it may seem like it) that will be there for you like you'd never believe. Trust me, I thought I'd never find a friend like her, and the funny thing is, is you should spend your life looking for someone special to be your friend cause God will send you someone when you least expect it to come and change your life drastically.
lots of hugs to you!!!
LP1

[This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (04-05-2003 09:24 AM).]

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