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Trouble Breathing
Member

since 2002-11-12

Posts 63

0 posted 2003-03-04 11:14 PM

The pain is too much for me to take,
I bite my lip to keep from crying,
To keep from thinking,
About what we had

One chance in a lifetime,
To find what we had,
Now it’s all gone,
And I’m all alone again, just like I always was

I miss you, more than ever
And I’m looking down upon your open casket,
Wishing I could have helped,
Now its all over, and I’ve got nothing left to say

Nothing left to live for,
You were my heart and my soul,
And now that this world no longer have you,
I no longer want to be part of this world

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-03-05 01:32 AM

A heartfelt write, I hope you realize that our loved ones memories are precisely what we have to live for.
Jason

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-03-05 10:07 AM

I know this too well... all too well.
But now you know the importance of life... how much it hurts for someone to be taken, and for their memories and the love for them you'll always hold.. keep living.
This is felt. ...too much :-/

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-05 02:50 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is so very heartbreaking, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way as when I lost my close friend Cameron, who died in a car accident on July 4 five years ago, I wanted him to be spared and for me to go on! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

4 posted 2003-03-07 02:09 AM

so tender and raw, this peice is captivating.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-03-08 05:17 AM

Nice expression of your pain...James

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-03-08 10:57 AM

Trouble Breathing - yes I have that too - am sorry about your loss - I know too well about loss - may the sweetest golden sight wrapped them sweetly in its wings - nice writing xxoo

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2003-03-08 03:57 PM

I have know this feeling too many times in the past two years, and sympathize with you, and know that you captured the sense of loss all too well.

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

8 posted 2003-03-09 04:44 PM

Soulwrenching. I feel the pain - a credit to your poetic ability to convey that pain so effectively. Well done.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

9 posted 2003-03-15 12:47 PM

This one is so very sad.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

10 posted 2003-03-15 10:10 PM

You have expressed pain well.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

11 posted 2003-03-23 11:15 AM

Back to the top.

pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

12 posted 2003-03-25 01:17 PM

So sad so true so beautiful. Thanks! *applause*

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

13 posted 2003-04-09 02:29 PM

Very Beautiful and terribly heartbreaking!!!! A must for the book!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

14 posted 2003-04-10 04:18 PM

I love this--it sent chills down my spine!! This is a difficult topic to write about, but u expressed ur feelings so beautifully!! I too have learned the hard way that it is important to cherish the times u have with the ppl u love because u never know when they will be taken from u--My cousin/childhood playmate was taken from me at the young age of 20--it just goes to show ya that life can be taken a lot sooner than we so often think--I love this--keep ur head up, it will get better, I promise--This gets my vote!!

ELMO

sister3of4
Junior Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 16
Northumberland, England

15 posted 2003-04-11 05:51 PM

This is a sad poem on a sad subject, but don't remember your friends death remember his life.

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