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Dark Poetry #3

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Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2003-03-01 02:09 PM

Darkness is coming,
I know you can feel it,
I feel it everywhere,
I see it in your soul,
I know that you knkow of it,
You are trying to run from it,
It's no use to run,
trust me, I would know.

JP
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

1 posted 2003-03-01 09:10 PM

I like this. It is short and vivid. It puts me in mind of a poem I posted in Dark #1 "Sentience Slain" - just the mood it creates mind you. This is better than mine.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

2 posted 2003-03-01 09:15 PM

thank you JP, you can never compare poems, they are all different.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-03-02 10:22 AM

the Light can still overcome the darkness... but yea, with some you just know its coming.
I like this.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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