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Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05
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0 posted 2003-03-01 12:19 PM



I feel mist around me,
It's closing in,
I look around but see nothing but darkness,
I reach out but feel nothing,
The mist goes away,
I am just sitting in class,
There is no mist,
But there is a darkness.

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-03-02 11:39 AM


its strange, isn't it, what we can feel even when surrounded by so many people. And we're left needing to act like nothing is going on.. like our minds really AREN'T spinning around wondering, confused, and fearing. But.. thats how it goes sometimes.
At least mist holds some beauty.
Enjoyed
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
2 posted 2003-03-02 05:10 PM


And I will add, in darkness also a kind of honest and searching beauty.
Jason

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