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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2003-02-28 10:17 PM


Day in, day out
Every day the same.
Beginning to not love life very slowly.
Doesn’t mean its time to die now does it?
Being alone, crying in the silent night.
Not a sole around to help.
The tears slowly start to flow.
Like a river, it never stops flowing.
No comfort, no love.
Never being able to understand why.
Pushing people away when they offer help
Just wanting to be left alone.
Just leave, get out, there is no hope.
Leave me to sob in peace.
Crying doesn’t help now does it?
It may not help, nor get me anywhere,
But it’s a sign I'm still alive.
This feeling I've known,
It comes and it goes with time,
But how long,
Before I crack?

"Water Over Matter"

© Copyright 2003 Lisa Ann - All Rights Reserved
babes684
Junior Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 10

1 posted 2003-02-28 10:43 PM


Hello :waves:

Cracking a wonderful name for this poem as for me i've not wrote a poem in 4-ever it seems :bawling: oh welp i'll live. This poems was really wonderful i kno i say that alot but i realy do mean it when i say itz wonderful and nobody really knows when the cracking will start n mayb it never will but yah i guess this dosnt realy make sence but um i better go u take care :kiss:

:loveya:
Ang

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