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Triskaidekaphobia
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2003-02-26 08:03 AM



My viscous blood can only escape
By running slowly away
Just as I can only evade
By death and decay.

I am fake...

My yellowed skull can only breathe
Via false vitality
Just as I can only evade
By death and decay.

Not genuine...

My frozen breath can only be freed
By submitting to need
Just as I can only evade
By life and dismay

The unoriginal...

All these things are but a regression
In the deconstruction of falling stars.

There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"?

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WisprWnd
Junior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 34

1 posted 2003-02-26 01:48 PM


This is how you are and I agree that you are fake, but so am I and that is why
I must congradu [edit] late!
     Cool post Tris.

watch the language eh? Sev



[This message has been edited by Severn (02-27-2003 12:03 AM).]

GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2003-03-02 10:50 AM


powerful..
its frightening to feel the way of escape is so narrow.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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