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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-02-20 06:17 PM


I don't suppose that you would know
what guilt does when it roams free,
slithering through my open veins
poisoning the all of me.

With venom of lies, bitter cries
all that I can not deny,
heavy as lead, a slow descent
through and around,
        down to the ground
a bitter IV drip. Enough!

It's made me sick...

I hold in hand a small entity
simple really, forgiving me,
let go of all the hate you feel
can't you see for me to heal
you must accept, that's the deal
please, let's move away...
               
leave the hurt in yesterday.

WhiteRose

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Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
1 posted 2003-02-20 09:32 PM


leave the hurt in yesterday. Nice write.
Jason

SPIRIT
Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
2 posted 2003-02-21 04:19 PM


Yes indeed, that last line pulls it altogether so well. Nice write.

I be me BUT who does me be?

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