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Dark Poetry #3

My Mouth (a haiku)

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)

0 posted 2003-02-15 04:56 AM

A broken faucet.
Words leak like drops of water.
Talking to myself.

We're never really free.

cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

1 posted 2003-02-17 12:56 PM

I often feel like this... lovely haiku.

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

cupcake
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since 2003-01-05

Posts 116

2 posted 2003-02-17 10:04 PM

Yes indeed I can relate to this very well. Nice!

I'm a reader - not a writer.

Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

3 posted 2003-02-19 01:22 AM

Very nice indeed. Most, I'd say, could relate very well. I know I can.
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)

4 posted 2003-02-26 12:33 PM

Hey, thanks alot for your comments. It seems I have a slight preference for haikus.

Necro Draconis
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since 2000-05-19

Posts 115

5 posted 2003-02-27 09:46 PM

Sometimes the best conversations in life are done when talking to oneself! I do it most of the time

JP
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

6 posted 2003-03-09 05:04 PM

Haiku!

Bless you!

well done, give me more.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2003-04-26 01:15 AM

I wanted to see more, and I found more. I love these. Do you post anymore or did the lack of responses scare you off?

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

8 posted 2003-04-26 01:16 AM

Okay..so it has 7 responses..but I think everyone gets what I mean. Sometimes this place is a little slow paced than other forums.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

9 posted 2003-04-26 10:30 AM

I love this, not sure why, but it speaks to me somehow!! UR right ur great with haikus!!

ELMO

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