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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-02-12 11:20 PM


I wait for him day and night
And sometimes he doesn't show up
Sometimes we make plans
And he breaks them

Then when I tell him he broke them
He acts like we never made the plans at all
How dumb is that

Sometimes I love him to death
Sometimes he gets me so ticked
I want to beat him up
He just doesn't understand

I tell him how I feel
But sometimes I think he just says he understands to make me happy
But he doesn't
He makes me ticked even worse

Sometimes I think men
Just don't want to try to understand us women
They just want to tick us off
Until they run us off
And we never want to come back

He just doean't understand
And I guess he never will

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2003-02-13 02:34 AM


I say it because it's true. I'm sorry. I suck.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

A. L. Becker
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since 2002-09-06
Posts 167
San Francisco, California
2 posted 2003-02-13 02:46 PM


This is really great.  I love your stuff.

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
3 posted 2003-02-17 09:39 AM


Where there are no words, there is no understanding.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

SweetSerenity
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since 2003-02-16
Posts 52
Canada
4 posted 2003-02-17 10:09 AM


Very nice.
I've felt the same way about guys in my life also.

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

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