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thelovelybat
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since 2003-03-10
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0 posted 2003-03-10 08:47 PM



meet up the cemetary
the grass is greener
you are looking younger,
paler, lover
looking like a vampire
i used to trust her
i tell her
meet up the cemetary
smoke and drink me
i am a sinner grandmother
leave me leave me be
i never inherited your godly guilt
i'm free i'm free i'm free
in this box
this friendly box
i saw into my eternity
don't be like her
her eyes rebel against mine
feel me restless
feel my weight
meet up the cemetary
by nights summer moon
escape escape

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-03-12 05:51 PM


yikes powerful post indeed.
Some strong emotions there.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Tristan
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since 2003-03-12
Posts 29

2 posted 2003-03-12 08:05 PM


Powerful piece. I like how you make it seem to come alive
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