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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2003-02-11 11:31 PM



Sunnier days come to no surprise
a temporary gesture..fools the unwise
spirits soaked in still ponds
distilled behind naked fronds
invisible to the human spy
they tabulate where you lie.

clear waters appear transparent
but distilled spirits dance in frenzy
anxious to witness human folly
effect miriads of peaceful souls
on darker days
even under the rays of light
enbodied spirits still lurk in the shadows
or taunt from the tallest gallows
sunny days..oh so shallow.

sunnier days come to the unwise
temorary gestures are of no surprise.


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-11-2003 11:33 PM).]

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Georgia
1 posted 2003-02-12 01:26 PM


Nicely done!
Jason Lyle
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2 posted 2003-02-12 09:16 PM


I enjoyed this,well said.
ecrivan
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3 posted 2003-02-12 09:52 PM


well it's about time I ventured outside the main forum, filled with so many names, to a more specific venue...and there have been many darker subjects already posted there thanks for sharing!


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