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peace
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since 2003-01-21
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0 posted 2003-01-27 12:57 PM


Please forgive if there are any spelling errors.
Hi everybody I've only just joined the other day
looking forward to reading everyones poems
I hope you enjoy reading my poems.
I guess I put my feelings to paper & write my emotions as actions.
here's the poem.


As I sit by the window and watch the rain come down
and as i pour my heart out I have cryed so many crys
and the tears roll down my face like a lonely waterfall
that knowone ever come's and sees

My soul lay screaming my heart reaching for love but only fights
the pain within and the crys from my spirit lay in realm

Feelings lay inbedded in my heart like a raiser sharp wire
traping my freedom & love
and I feet the timeless emotions like a rain drop driping inside of me

My pain still goes deeper like roots of a tree
like a flooded river like a drowned soul
my thoughts get soaked by the pattens of rain
my mind going deeper this storm getting stronger

I'm surrounded by a maze of blackroses
and I feel a knife edge cutting in to me playing with my fears
and my memerys twisting in my mind

As I twist around with my hands in the air screaming for freedom
and the rain keeps falling on me

As I  look to the sky and a see two doves fly there not for me they have left
me behind  flying to the heavens above and my tears could been seen in their eyes
as if they were angels glowing shining up the darken sky
I now fall to my knees and scream out come back don't leave me here
But somehow I know it's not my time to go
But I hate myself  I strike back in anger like lightning to a tree
this saddness this anger which floods my emotions
this pain has a hold on me

I crawl in to a ball so lonely so isolated and don't have much pride in myself

I now close my eyes and dream a dream
and hope that oneday this will all dissapear


[This message has been edited by peace (01-27-2003 05:49 AM).]

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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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1 posted 2003-01-27 11:41 PM


Interesting post.
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