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alibaster
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since 2001-07-07
Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2003-01-15 02:18 PM



I dare not leave the darkness.
Resting contently among the harshness.
I am comforted
and fed
watching them fall away...
The Pieces
bleeding freely
falling away from me.

I speak not of existing torments.
Dreaming only of horrid resentments.
I am lulled
and appalled
watching them fall away…
The Pieces
screaming weakly
falling away from me.

I hold tight to my dieing soul.
Pressing the weary flesh back into scared hole.
I am spent. Readily,
and willingly
watching them fall away…
The pieces
rotting quickly
falling away from me.

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster

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Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123
California
1 posted 2003-01-15 03:39 PM


Very well written piece...

"I hold tight to my dieing soul.
Pressing the weary flesh back into scared hole."

I feel that way sometimes, I'm sure everyone has there moments.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence  the most.

GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2003-01-15 06:22 PM


this stings but with a dull ache.

I enjoyed it still, very much
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2003-01-16 02:18 PM


I speak not of existing torments.
Dreaming only of horrid resentments.
I am lulled
and appalled
watching them fall away…
ANOTHER PHEONIX RISES TODAY

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2003-01-16 02:34 PM


out of old pain comes new beginnings - although sometimes only pain comes out of pain. Well written.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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