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The Fire
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The Fire |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
I stood outside the fire, Watching the flame. Pushing away the darkness, Keeping it tame, I watch as the fire does die, The darkness growing. Did the darkness kill the light, Know way of knowing. I watched as the embers go out, Despite all I tried. The darkness enfolds me, My last hope has died. In time I become a creature of night, No longer needing instead fearing the light. Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most. |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
No longer needing.... Good read, ty. Until...alibaster {ali} The Queen of Darkness "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Thank you. Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ada'doLisdo'ti, I really liked the feel of this sort of blue and morose without slipping into despair. Did you mean to spell 'Know' that way in line eight because it makes a great play on words but it doesn't sound planned. Anyway I liked this and hope to read more of your work. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
I meant to spell it that way but it’s an unintentional play on words. Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most. |
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