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HeroicVillan Junior Member
since 2002-11-09
Posts 34Lost..... |
Understanding That pain inside, so hard to hide. Always misleading, cant stop the bleeding. Feeling deep down, king without a crown. Wolf without a pack, nothing left to lack. Everything is gone, happiness was a con. |
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angelfriend Member
since 2003-01-11
Posts 52Michigan USA |
Deep stuff. I liked the flow of it. Especially liked: Wolf without a pack, nothing left to lack. The loneliness of that hit me. Thanks for sharing. "The only gift is a portion of thyself" - Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by angelfriend (01-11-2003 11:41 PM).] |
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ForGetMeNot087 Junior Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 15 |
OMG  !!! what a great poem.. I can really relate to it..  i look forward to more of your stuff. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i know the feeling, someties happiness is a con, like it feels too good to last, and usually it doesnt for too long |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Heroic Villan, strong poem - sometimes the con is more powerful than the real thing. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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