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Ian Hughes
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since 2003-01-08
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0 posted 2003-01-08 01:55 PM


1. Preheat oven to 350 degrees F (175 degrees C). Grease and flour one 9x13 inch cake pan.
2. In a mixing bowl; beat oil and eggs with an electric mixer until creamy. Add the sugar and vanilla and beat well.
3.Combine the flour salt, baking soda, and ground cinnamon together in a bowl. Slowly add this mixture to the egg mixture and mix until combined. The batter will be very thick. Fold in the apples by hand using a wooden spoon. Spread batter into the prepared pan.
4. Bake at 350 degrees F (175 degrees C) for 45 minutes or until cake tests done. Let cake cool on a wire rack. Once cake is cool serve with a dusting of confectioners' sugar or with a Cream Cheese Frosting.

You [edited by moderator] im leaving you,
this is what my lifes become
and i hate you for it.
Sit there and eat this
My tears were the water
The eggs from my womb
You took and poisoned
Eat it and laugh
But You and I , are not We

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-09-2003 07:16 AM).]

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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
Florida
1 posted 2003-01-08 04:17 PM


ok, this is diffrent, but not all poetry turns out happy..I guess this is good..

"Water Over Matter"

LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

2 posted 2003-01-08 07:10 PM


Yeah, this was an interesting poem, but everyone has a different style of venting and i like that.
LP1

Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
3 posted 2003-01-12 12:26 PM


*stares confusedly* ...Interesting.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

Nikolette Sadness
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Posts 337
port richey fl.
4 posted 2003-01-13 02:38 AM


my fiance and i end
ed it today...he killed me...but Ian i dont believe a man who could express a feeling like that one could ever kill a heart...

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

[This message has been edited by Nikolette Sadness (01-13-2003 02:39 AM).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2003-01-14 06:16 PM


No more baking for me! I could be facetious and say this poem is well done, but maybe not.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
6 posted 2003-01-16 09:18 PM


A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

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