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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2003-01-04 12:34 PM


Are you broken on the wheel again?
One more turn,
Catherine of the Kist.

I kissed you once.
Before you were sod.
Now your memory is a flame
burning up the rain.
An itch you can't reach
from the wheel.

Your remains are roses.
All thorns and petals, on the wheel.
Give us a spin.
Catherine of the Kist.

All thorns and petals,
on the wheel.

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jjote
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1 posted 2003-01-04 09:50 AM


Like an ode to a lost love?
A little sad, but keeping the memory alive without grieving. Have I read this right?

LADY_DEATH
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2 posted 2003-01-04 08:42 PM


A tragic love story?


bsquirrel
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3 posted 2003-01-06 06:44 PM


Both of you have a grasp on it. It involves Wuthering Heights (my girl's favorite book) and the Catherine Wheel, a torture device from the age of the Inquisition or thereabouts.

Aside from that, you're on your own.

Eromyna
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4 posted 2003-01-07 04:57 PM


Oh wow. You are really really good!

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

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5 posted 2003-01-08 01:58 AM


Mikey!!! I've noticed your decreased activity lately, admist my own increases and decreases, mostly of the later. I've missed your input.

When I bought their new album, and loved it, I wanted to ask you, have you heard System of a Down's new album, "Steal this Album"? It's fantastic. I, for one, am quite satisifed.

On to the piece.... splendid. A much enjoyed read. I love your style, and always enjoy reading from your work.

~Titus

"A life unexamined is not worth living."
                       -Socrates

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2003-01-08 12:41 PM


Eromyna, thank you.

Titus, I've been extremely busy of late, so that's why I've had such a decrease in activity. I haven't heard the full album of System of the Down's latest, but I do enjoy what I hear on the radio from them. Thanks for reading my stuff, even when I don't poke my head in here as much as I'd like to.

Mike

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7 posted 2003-01-11 02:03 PM


Loved this, felt a little Reznor for a sec. And the Catherine Wheel, an intriguing device and a once great english band
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