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iMMuNe
Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA

0 posted 2003-01-03 11:09 PM


You've died now,
And I'm now alone,
Sitting inside,
A broken home.

Saying there was ways to avoid,
All the troubles,
All the problems,
Now we see what life has done,

Shot us in the back with two handguns,
Just when we thought we won this day,
We gather now in a funeral,
And begin to pray,

Lord take me away from this place,
So much hatred so much power,
So much souls being devoured,
Now I see what life has done,

Put me in a silence that just begun,
The quietness begins to strain my brain,
Day by day,
Driving me insane.

You've died now,
And I'm all alone,
Sitting inside,
A broken home...

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LADY_DEATH
Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105
Fl
1 posted 2003-01-04 08:40 PM


I know how it feels to be alone.And it hurts alot.But the future is bright!


LadyPeach1
Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

2 posted 2003-01-05 02:14 AM


This is a really sad poem and it is hard being alone. Good write.
LP1

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