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PoeticJustice Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 44AK, USA |
This is also a poem I wrote on that night I found out Kristi was gone... Seems like such a long time ago... Gone I cry, I weep, Here there is no sleep. Only torment and hatred and sadness, belated. I (edited by moderator) bad, In waiting so long, Now I’m alone, and you’re long gone. “She’s gone...” I hear In my head over and more. Each time more tears come to my eyes, In love I’m poor. I (edited by moderator) in waiting so long to ask you to be mine, To make beautiful songs. You’re gone... To Idaho or some far away place. I’ll never see you again, I’ll be alone forever. [This message has been edited by vlraynes (12-17-2002 10:29 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
PoeticJustice~ There is so much sadness and regret in this piece, and you've expressed the emotions well. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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