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lil devil _69 New Member
since 2002-11-21
Posts 3 |
Hard life A good person living a hard life, Isn’tthat how it always is. All the assholes in the world getting the breaks . All their promises broken, Where love is just a token And hardship is a lifestyle. With the unruly control it all. Where do I go from here. With all the big stars running from the past That everyone else is stuck in. The world has become an insane place Where rulers are ruled And we are helpless to watch As the things around us fall apart. Due to secrets keep That could have been spoken And things that could have been done Left unfinished By: Tammy Barlet |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions. Stick around and enjoy the variety. May you encounter many poetic friends in here. CHEERS! "Where love is just a token And hardship is a lifestyle." Can't say I agree, but token love is only one kind of love people may write about. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (11-30-2002 09:56 PM).] |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Isn't that the sad truth, though, that all the rich [editing self] get away with everything; while the "normal" people get stuck in last place? Very nicely done! Zai jian Carson If time and space are curved, where do all of the straight people come from? |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Hm.. Interesting. Somewhat remeniscent of some Biblical psalms. At any rate, welcome to Passions. Hope we all learn a lot from each other. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
no one really lives on easy street. everyone's got their demons. we all got things to atone for. enjoyed this though. hardships are demons only by comparison i guess.  enjoy your stay here at pip, however long it may be. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
everyone suffers, life is suffering but its really how you look at things that colors your take on it |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Tammy, Never know if someone's poem is their own experience or an observation, however, I started at the back of the pack, and I've turned out to be a nice person in spite of hardships, past and on-going. A's are given more cause they don't have as much spirit as you and I????? Now, what fun would that be! No challenge at all! Never say die and never cry uncle.... just work your own 'a' off, and you will be just fine.....write down some goals and a deadline to achieve them...when you do, do it again... I like your poem in that it causes one to think and that is one sign of what a poem should do! Am looking forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for this. Enjoyed the thoughts. Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
"Never say die and never cry uncle...." A true klingon! Liking the responses to this poem. Once again, lil devil, thanks for sharing this one. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
"Due to secrets keep that could have been spoken" I particulary like those lines. Very good poem. WinterWren |
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