Dark Poetry #3 |
forevers for fools |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
dont want to be, committed to forevers again, hollow words on heavy hearts, limited choiceless life without options, destiny signed in ink, no freedom in forevers just another ball and chain |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Never been a big fan of forevers myself (history will testify) But, I've never really thought of them. Seems.....imprisoning to me. Ed |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
How true this is |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes I look at it that way...and sometimes I want forever...but forever is change...James |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wow. Seems like you made that poem just for me. No I know you made it for you, and a beautiful poem it is too. WinterWren |
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GeorgiaPaver Junior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 15Savannah, GA |
Forever's are nevers in my book. Great poem, very well expressed. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Interesting little poem. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Forever is nothing but a Hallmark card: as flimsy as it is insincere. Nicely written, very much enjoyed! If homosexuality is a disease, let's all call in queer to work: "Hello. Can't work today, still queer." (If only...>; P) |
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PoeticJustice Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 44AK, USA |
Yeah, contracts suck. Forever is a long time... And what seems good at the time may not be so good later on... |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
you never wanted to live forever, just to stick around and see what happens and where we go? yeah, me neither. through the ravages of sleeplessness lies the comfort of the night |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
I don't believe in forever, but I would if I could be a vampire! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That poem should be on a card. |
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