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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Everyone says, I want this, I want that, Everyone whines, like a 2-year-old spoiled brat, Complain, whine, throw a fit, Let's all just act like some little kids, Let's cry a river, Let's just ball an ocean, Too many over exaggerations, With unnessecary fake emotions, Don't make life more complicated than it has to be, Especially don't make it harder for me! All these greedy people, With nothing else to do, Accept sit around and gossip, And maybe even talk about me or you? Everyone says "I want, I want, I want" But you can't always "have, have, have" How about you get over yourself, And maybe grow up while your at it, Cause I'm sick of you people always making life hard, I'm sick and tired, I've had it! Stop being so immature, And acting like a baby, Then you might have more friends, Or even people may like you, maybe? Greed, Money, and all the things you want, You think will be handed to you on a golden plate, Well it's not and you need a reality check, And if you don't realize that, hey it's to late! Cause your into yourself too much, And what you want, You don't care what anyone else has to say, Well if you want to be a team player, You have to know how to play, So step up to the plate, and take a whack, Oh but first, to play, you have to have a bat! (And I'm not getting it for you either!) This poem is just representing, laziness, greed, selfishness, being conceited, stubborn, and thinking you know it all!!! Alot of people in my school are like the idiot (who I don't know who I am pointing this towards) in my here poem.  [This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (11-25-2002 10:50 PM).] |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
hey good on ya, ummm dark poetry huh? do you mind if i call it venting poetry. your stuck, because venting is almost equal to bitching and whining. Everything that you seem to despise. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I find myself using that word while driving...sometimes...James |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
I was not trying to bitch and whine in this poem. I was stating a fact about people, it wasn't venting either. I just told it like it was. Yeah, of course people bitch and complain, but I wasn't trying to do that in this poem and my whole purpose of writing this was just to show how much people do it. I am not going to say I personally never whine, ore complain, cause indeed I do! But I don't base my life around it all the time as other people do. Ex: People at my school. I was just describing some behavior problems people tend to have. Sorry if anyone took it the wrong way and no fingers were pointed. If you don't like my poem, sorry. I write what I think, and what I think is my opinion, I have mine, which I am entitled too, and you have yours. thanks for your replies.LP1 |
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