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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2002-11-25 07:00 AM





if i bleed for you,
would you
then,
shake off your stupor,
realize how
i only wanted
to be your
friend,
not claim you,
own you,
chain you,
cage you,
doom you,
to the
eternity
of
"till death do us part",
to finally
fly again,
uncaged
and free
like you,
dear friend,
to share
your open sky,
and know,
every once in a while,
youre there
for
me

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wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2002-11-25 08:34 AM


This shoudn't need.....the bleeding

I do understand this.


Ed


bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-12-18 12:38 PM


You can see the slow crawl up, and the growing mind, here.

"Time to put away childish things," or somethin' like that.

Mike

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-08-24 11:05 AM


Michele . . . priceless words
xxoo

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-08-24 12:45 PM


Words I have searched for for four years. Everything I feel, and felt is summed up in these words. I was stunned when I read this. It's as if your words were extracted from my mind. Amazing!!!! Thank you VERY much for sharing this.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
5 posted 2003-08-25 11:17 AM


interesting write...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
6 posted 2003-08-25 04:10 PM


love this,
the style..
Everything.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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7 posted 2003-08-25 04:32 PM


gee thanks, its been a long time, thanks sue for digging this up from the grave....lol
i forgot about it

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