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~K
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since 2002-10-19
Posts 104


0 posted 2002-11-15 11:48 PM



I swallow you
hook line
and sinker
An invitation
to the quicksand
and I'm
diving
deeper
blood baths
hypnotic
chants
hidden paths where
demons fear
to tred
I take you
in a sinners fit
to be
damned
& born
again

~K

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-11-16 01:06 PM


Masochism, in all its pleasure.
An enjoyable read.

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

2 posted 2002-11-16 02:12 PM


Interesting imagery here that seems, in some ways, to parallel christological imagery with its conclusion and temptation at its beginning.

I look forward to hearing what others have to say about this one.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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