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Succubus
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since 2002-09-30
Posts 82
Canada, Ontario

0 posted 2002-11-03 11:49 AM


I'm so tired... Can't you tell darling?

I'm Tired of beind the understanding one
Tired of being the one who bothers to call
Tired of being the one who's always there
Tired of being the one who listens

I'm so Tired... Can't you read my mind darling?

I'm Tired of being the one who never condemns
Tired of being the one who gives compliments
Tired of being the one who worries
Tired of being the one who shows interest

I'm so Tired... Are your eyes open darling?

I'm Tired of being the one who gives gifts
Tired of being the one who remembers special occasions
Tired of being the one who gets jealous
Tired of being the one who cries

I'm so Tired... Are you there darling?

I'm Tired of being the one who cares
Tired of being the one who encourages you
Tired of the drama you put me through
Tired of being the one misses you

I'm so Tired... Can you hear me darling?

I'm Tired of being the one to feel lonely
Tired of being the one who gives praise
Tired of being the one who holds your hand
Tired of being the one who's never late

I'm so Tired... Can't you see the tears darling?

I'm Tired of being the one who feels depressed
Tired of being the one who waits
Tired of being the one who appreciates
Tired of being the one who accepts

I'm so Tired... Darling?

I'm Tired of being the one who shares
Tired of being the one who sees the best in every situation
Tired of being the generous one
Tired of being the one who's fair

I'm so Tired...

I'm so Tired of being the one who doesn't feel secure
Tired of being the one who's always afraid
Tired of being the one who makes plans for the future
Tired of being the one who's tolerant

I'm so...

I'm so Tired of being the one who cooks
Tired of being the one who holds you at night
Tired of being the one who defends you
Tired of being the one who loves you

I'm...

I'm so Tired of being the one who's honest
Tired of being the truthful one
Tired of being the one who's powerless
Tired of being the one with time

I...

I'm Tired of being the one who dreams of you
Tired of being the one who feels agony
Tired of being the one who misses you
Tired of being the one who questions you

...

I'm Tired of being the one who gives a damn about you
Tired of being the one who prays for you
Tired of being the one who feels empty
Tired of being the one who never quits

..


I'm Tired darling because you don't love me the way I would like to be loved by you

.

I'm Tired of You and Tired of Me
I'm Tired of Us



"We who have lived in concentration camps remember people who gave comfort to others, along with their last morsel bread..."  -Victor Frankl

[This message has been edited by Succubus (11-03-2002 11:52 AM).]

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Temptress
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Posts 7136
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1 posted 2002-11-03 09:07 PM


You know...usually..the other half of the relationship is feeling the exact same way.

Definetely something I can relate to, and probably the one I love right now can relate to also. The solution? Work together?

enjoyed how this made me think.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
2 posted 2002-11-04 12:26 PM


and tired of being tired

i am sure you gave voice to the feelings of many

cheers
J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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The heart of you
3 posted 2002-11-04 08:40 AM


I would say that it is time for the two sides to come together, as my co-Moderator has suggested.  

Well done, this made me think as well.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-11-06 07:09 PM


Hey, Succubus?

The ending is here:

I'm so...

I'm so Tired of being the one who cooks
Tired of being the one who holds you at night
Tired of being the one who defends you
Tired of being the one who loves you

That hurts beautiful.

The rest is just dressing
on a wound.

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