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Dark Poetry #3

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leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2002-10-27 06:45 PM

he knows I can do it
but i keep it at my side
nobody can know
the secret show
i keep locked deep inside
the need for attention
the need for constant care
the need for admiration
always hiding
always there
he knows I can do it
surpress the milky way
let go of earth bound
fly into space
the unknown
with black holes
to suck you dry
he knows i'll take the chance
one day in two-thous-five
to seize the captive audience
and make my world mine

D edgar Grey
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)

1 posted 2002-10-27 10:38 PM

I liked this bit...even though it seemed down at first, there was a lot of optimism amongst the "black holes." Very nice! >; )

"Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

2 posted 2002-10-29 01:13 AM

I know you can do it too but why wait until 2005? Carpe Diem!

Succubus
Member

since 2002-09-30

Posts 82
Canada, Ontario

3 posted 2002-10-29 09:06 PM

That was great. I enjoyed this very much. Just remember that insecurity and being needy steams from basic insecurity.
Kisses,
Succubus

"We who have lived in concentration camps remember people who gave comfort to others, along with their last morsel bread..." -Victor Frankl

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