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MikelEavage
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since 2002-10-21
Posts 6


0 posted 2002-10-22 06:58 PM



The feeling is gone
One thing that kept me going erased
individualist that never was
just another one of the "master" race

Thought I was special
Some talents at hand
The truth is I'm worthless
Can no one understand?

Searching for a use
It cannot be found
Confused child
go ahead, ask around

Writing blankly
For no ones heart
overlook this child
and these works of art

dismiss my scream
blow off my cry
I never hurt anyone
An approaching black side

dont think this is psued
I mean what I say
My soul on the keys,
For mercy I pray

Searching for a use
It cannot be found
Confused child
go ahead, ask around

Writing blankly
For no ones heart
overlook this child
and these works of art

Will it ever end?

© Copyright 2002 Keith Parsons - All Rights Reserved
eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2002-10-23 03:25 AM


ah, the neverending search...eor
leafseranade
Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA
2 posted 2002-10-27 06:53 PM


The way I see it we all want to be different but we end up exactly the same. "Don't worry what other people think" doesn't apply to artists, does it?  Because we do.  We care.  As long as we keep evolving and finding new audiences and getting new feedback (good or bad) that'll hopefully be enough to fulfill.
Midnitesun
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Posts 28647
Gaia
3 posted 2002-10-27 09:06 PM


Is there nothing worse for a writer than being ignored? I have this feeling more people read you than you may think. Keep your chin up and your pen down, and keep writing, for your self-expression.
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