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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Take this metal from my shoes-- I don't wanna dance no more. Play blues for me--I'm "born to lose"-- and may self pity mop the floor. My head is noisy--my heart's broke-- and there's no tales I haven't told. Direct me to the fork in road. I heard they'll pay for one used soul. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
WOW this is Great....enjoyed very much. H. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Take the fork to the right...it leads to happiness. I can never imagine you not dancing! |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
Loved this. Kisses, Succubus Some say it's better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing... |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
Describes how I was feeling lastnight and basically everynight..good write.. Consider yourself fuzzed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Oh no! Please don't tell me this is inspired by my critique of chou's secret garden? *hug* Or is it but Joni again?  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
geez Mikey...forgot I even threw this out here....actually, part of little game we play around here. "Circle Blues"--- basic blues chord and you take turns making up the verse. The fork in the road thing--well, you know that old blues legend, about the musician who meets the devil at the fork in the road... I'm actually surprised anyone liked this at all. I was just sort of blowing my nose! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This one reminded me of a movie I once saw, the title of which escapes me just now. Anyway, I thought it was a great write and the title fits perfectly I think! |
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