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Nerys
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since 2002-10-18
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0 posted 2002-10-18 11:55 AM


Morphine lullabies in folded
pockets of spacetime
the fresh wound is an old scar
stitched together by my need
to escape you, forget you
by whatever means available
created to destroy you
and miss you always

© Copyright 2002 Nerys - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-10-18 11:43 PM


Welcome to Passions! I imagine Frankenstein had his own private nightmares...please check your email for a special greeting.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2002-10-19 01:14 AM


Welcome, mistress of F, to this land of poetry.
When you find a way to forget him, will you please post it here, and share the secret with the rest of us?

D edgar Grey
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)
3 posted 2002-10-20 01:11 AM


Ni hao!
Welcome to Pip...I don't come here very often, but it's always nice to get advice from people who actually know how to write poetry, so I enjoy my little visits!

Hmm...I liked the opening of this piece, especially because it made me feel that the ending was going to be quite different from what it was. That's my favourite thing about poetry: unexpected endings! And you have done an excellent job with that!

Keep up the nice work!!

Zai jian.

"Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones

Succubus
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since 2002-09-30
Posts 82
Canada, Ontario
4 posted 2002-10-20 01:43 PM


Welcome... I really enjoyed your piece.  
"Your Distinctiveness Will be Gladly Added to Our Own..."
"You Have Been Assimilated..."
Lator,
Succubus

Some say it's better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing...
...But I'll only settle for a 100 thank you...

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