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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2002-10-18 11:35 AM



Be still
And look in my eyes
No fewer demons reside
In mine than yours
So take care what wind
You cast your words upon
For they may land
Where you do not intend
And grow to be
Demise

I do not fear you
For all your ways and wiles
Have but little meaning on the lost
Little danger to the damned

Be still now…
Hush those muttering thoughts
And quiet those fears
Save your craft for others
And dare me not to lose

I have lost before
And know the feel
Of you

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-10-18 12:53 PM


"Save your craft for others"

um. I guess it DOES take one to know one.


you seem to quite adept at spellcasting, yo'self.

gimme five? guru-daddy...grin

WhileIWasGone
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2 posted 2002-10-18 04:59 PM


WOW...I love this...Great work.

Enjoyed
DeaDiAmore

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2002-10-18 05:18 PM


Ser... yes it takes one perhaps to know one..
(chuckling)

WhileIwasGone: thank you ma'am... glad you enjoyed. just playing with a thought and a conversation I had...and wanted to turn it into a story (of sorts)...

wranx
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4 posted 2002-10-19 01:49 AM



A great way, to bring us to;

"I have lost before
And know the feel
Of you"

Yes,

Ed

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5 posted 2002-10-21 05:37 PM


Challenge met,
and incinerated
(slow).


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