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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-10-18 11:11 AM



It could have been
ME.
But for that cold
mysterious
Hand of Fate,
the one that often
deals out Hate
not Love,
that dealt YOU
that final card.
It could have been
ME.

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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1 posted 2002-10-18 12:20 PM


There'll be a new deal, another shuffle...then there's the odds.
WhileIWasGone
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2 posted 2002-10-18 05:02 PM


Great work...enjoyed.

DeaDiAmore

wranx
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3 posted 2002-10-19 01:43 AM


An old Quaker saying;

Better thee, than me.

Good write, Kacy

~Ed

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4 posted 2002-10-19 09:39 AM


I Win

finding
the courage
to just
let it happen
let the disappointment

Impact

& settle

knowing failure
was likely
acceptance
becomes
my last chance
for victory

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-10-19 10:50 AM


Naw!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Midnitesun
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6 posted 2002-10-19 02:13 PM


Thanks Pipsters!
I am just feeling so lucky these days, to still be looking up at the stars and moon each night. I feel as if I have been dealt a lucky hand.

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