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clumsy
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since 2002-10-10
Posts 106
canada.

0 posted 2002-10-17 10:11 AM


i'm tired this morning,
listening to, songs that
.design.me.to.break.
sometimes you do that to me,
just sometimes though,
not all the time.

there's frost on the ground
,i ,want ,to ,drown ,inside
bathtubs filled with blood,
why can't you believe me when
i say, it's every four that bleed

it's every four.
count it during class,
i'll be one of those people
who cut themselves to
make everything seem real

i still can't feel real with you
because being with you is like a fairytale
it's like those girls loving girls movie
something has to go wrong.

"i'm a light headed wonder."
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devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
1 posted 2002-10-17 01:30 PM


You've expressed quite a bit of topic here with various subjects. You've got *feeling* hun, give you that.

vent and write and vent some more...and make those fairytales come true!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18
Posts 486

2 posted 2002-10-17 01:58 PM


Nice work...enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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since 2002-09-20
Posts 155
Fraggle Rock
3 posted 2002-10-17 04:49 PM


yes I do agree with Devina..powerful words you have here..don't give up..go with it if all possible..easier said then done I know *sigh*

Consider yourself fuzzed

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